Week Nine

Strategies for Revising/Expanding

I. Is there any MAJOR revision you need to do?  What is it?  
I do not think that there’s an MAJOR revisions that need to be made.

II: Examine the main thesis statement for the current Webtext. Drawing on the main thesis statement, what do you expect your audience to do, say, or think after reading your piece? Be specific.
I expect my audience to say that they feel like they know more about how they learned more about CPCF and its role in the community.

III: Will your current content illicit the response from your audience that you hope it will? Why or why not?  I think I will because I do explain how CPCF works, as well as how community organizations/public charities work.

·         What do you need more to support your current/new ideas and how do you intend to do it?
I could find more support for the part about funding. I need to call the organization themselves and ask how they are funded, including government funding.   

·         Would another example help you make your current/new points more clear?  Why or why not?
I do not think it would, it just needs more support to back up the statements.

·         What experts exist in the field of your topic? Have you referred to any of them?  You are expected to know who the experts are.  By experts, I mean nationally or globally recognized names in the field, not just an author of a text.
The experts in my topic would be sociologists or social workers. I do not know if I have referred to any of them.

·         Do any of your current/future terms need to be defined for your readers?  You should be using anchor text only for this. 
I do not think any of my terms need to be defined for my readers.

·         You’ll be incorporating your podcast into the Webtet due in Phase Two.  The podcast is only 3-4 minutes - is there anything you’d like to elaborate on in regards to your podcast topic?  
I do not think so.

IV: For the visuals in your Webtext, ask yourself the following:

·         Do your visuals represent the content of my text, or have you added them just because you were supposed to?
I believe they do represent the content of my text.

·         What do the colors of your Webtext mean? In other words, how do they represent your topic (they should)?
The blue is representing the responsibility of the community as well as being educated about a topic.
Green represents growth and renewal of the community.
White and black just have a form of formality.

V: Examine the overall structure of your Webtext and ask

·         Have you effectively broken up your text with appropriate headings reflecting the content of each?
Yes

·         Have you written a preliminary conclusion that does more than summarize my webtext or repeat the introduction?   Explain.
Yes I have. I wrote what I had concluded based on the research I had done.

VI:  Have someone read your Webtext and tell them you need them to ask you three content questions about your text.  Write the questions in this document.

Is there a residential requirement for those who receive scholarships & grants?
Is CPCF similar to the community foundation that is run by Community Hospital?

Do other communities in Lake Co. have their own community foundations?